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Entry #115 - Print design - by Solana Rey

Ron Sturgeon picked a winning design in their print & packaging design contest

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Self Storage Brochure

$468

Custom Print & Packaging Design package

Purchased for $468

(including 99designs fees)

by Ron Sturgeon

Contest started Sat, 06 Mar 2010 22:12:36 +0000

Last feedback Fri, 19 Mar 2010 21:44:42 +0000

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Tue, 09 Mar 2010 16:53:06 +0000
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    #15 & 16 dont use the latest content. too much blue? doesnt pop. The picture of the office is not the best us of the real estate here, and lets face it the office isnt impressive looking. no picture on the front may be best. Using the pictures smaller through the piece is likely a better choice.

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Tue, 09 Mar 2010 16:47:08 +0000
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    #11, the sdapce table is too diminutive, and may be on the wrong panel. the outside panels are in landscape mode, need to be in portrait mode.

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Tue, 09 Mar 2010 16:39:24 +0000
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    # 7 is just boring, doesnt pop

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Tue, 09 Mar 2010 14:14:06 +0000
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    note to all, 24/7 access is a huge selling point, most self storages dotn offer it. it might be worth of an icon or soem other design feature empphasising it.

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Tue, 09 Mar 2010 14:13:14 +0000
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    #14 i like this design a lot, but it doesnt use the latest material i uploaded and the best reasons to use us. the reasons were sorted in order of importantce. 24/7 is a huge benefit most others dotn offer it

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Tue, 09 Mar 2010 14:07:55 +0000
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    #11 is laid out wrong, it should be in portrait not landscape, ie, it stands long side up in a brochure rack

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:35:18 +0000
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    #5 is a little too artsy i think. too many curly cues, not sure i can warm up to the images diagonaly, but not ruling it out. I think the real estate is too important on the front to have the curly cue take so much. the interior is boring. I realize its a boring topic, note that I uploaded new content with lest text, but graphically it looks like a book, it needs somehting to make it look more appealing. also everything on the interios shares equal dignity graphcially, so that makes it less interesting, and my eye isnt drawn to any one section, etc

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:30:57 +0000
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    #6 does a good job of getting the most important info on the front, though the bullets arent cosen as presented, they were sorted by most important first. note ive uploaded new content document, with reduced text.

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 17:24:11 +0000
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    #6 is pretty good, but please note that the reasons to chose us are listed in order of importance in the list furnished, so the top ones use for the front should be from that list starting at the top. Please note that I have rewritten the content info and will upload it now, so there is less material. I also think making this piece a tri fold 8.1 x 11 may make more sense, but will leave that up to the designers.

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    Carey Creative
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 16:24:58 +0000
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    Hi Ron,

    I have also posted this on the page for my individual design, but want to be sure you see the comment.

    Thanks for the feedback! Could you give me a little bit of information about what parts of the brochure you want to stand out the most? That way, I can try to make those parts "pop", and submit a revision.

    Thanks again.

    Carey

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 02:59:53 +0000
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    #2, 3, & 4 arent in the right format

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 02:58:55 +0000
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    #1 appears to be laid out correctly. it is a bi fold, with 4 printable panels. the materials provided are used here, but this piece has no pop. all the items furnished try to share equal dignity. I will say maybe I furnished to much content for the allowed space, so it can be presented on a tri fold format as well, with 6 printable panels

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    Ron Sturgeon
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    Mon, 08 Mar 2010 02:55:29 +0000
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    all the text materials etc were uploaded i think, let me know after reviewing the materials let me know if there is anyhting else needed

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    MFDesigns
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    Sun, 07 Mar 2010 08:31:15 +0000
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    Please can you specify size.
    If it is A4
    i. Plain front and back Leaflet Type
    ii. Bi Fold (Landscape) this will contain 4 portions (pages) in
    A4 size front and back.

    Waiting ...

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