Let me say again....
In order to not have people working on submissions that have little chance of success, I have eliminated a number of designs. Not because they are bad, just because they are going down a road that's already been taken. The submission #2 is very good for that 'look and feel'.
What I would like, in order to see if the story can be depicted better but in a different way, is a *different* look and feel, i.e. don't cluster the faces around a central child. Try something completely different. Again, please don't give a slightly different version of #2 . Show how you would tell the story in a poster.
You may want to check out this web site for examples of how other designers have told stories in a poster: http://www.allmoviereplicas.com/8_D