#76: typography I like and the color

PUBLIC COMMENTS on WHAT ELEMENTS I LIKE FROM THE TOP DESIGNS:

#71: the weight of the font...however, I still need to see it on a white background and color selection; plus the logo fees light and adds momentum, lacking on the "networking" concept but still implied.

#66: not the font, want to reduce the number of colors to 1 and most 2, clever idea of making "A"'s into "F's

#59: creative twist on the "networking" and adding momentum and curvature...the "network" or "exchange" concept not quite there...possibly could use one "side" less

#25: the interlock or "exchange/network" concept is more explicit, if we could simplify and make more elegant, like the notion

#64: Hi, I see the "A" concept but it looks on first blush like a space ship, maybe too angular? #66, #65, and #59 are heading in the right direction, I'd like variation on that to narrow scope, each have elements I like and an original melding could find it.....thanks!

#46: I think there are too many colors, i think it is a very interesting concept and have 3 starred it to share with other designers --- it's clever...the thin lines concern me.

Here is a tip: #59 has some elements I like as well, similar to what you're doing...I think I am going to triangulate between what you and that design are doing.

#72: Hello, I see what you're going for...I think it's too hard to tell is't an A and an F and to work as a stand-alone.....I am liking some of the elements of number #59 because of the simplicity, motion, and am looking for something to convey the way "allies" exchange their networks for each other.....perhaps that gives some direction?

#74: I think the font definitely should be two colors, rather than one (per your other entry).....hmmm....I think having so many boxes makes it look "noisy" meaning when it gets printed out in smaller form on cards or as an icon it will get blurred. The boxes/cubes things seems to be done so there needs to be an interesting twist to it...perhaps combining what other people are doing via "networks" and also an overlap? The idea is two sales people, each with their own networks, can trade part of their networks to get others.....

#78: hi, thanks for the submission....color scheme is off, but easily fixed. I think I don't quite get right away the "logo" -- it is curvey x's...but I think the idea of two "somethings" overlapping each other is the right general direction, just not so....hmmm....they look like marshmallow people....

#46: like the TYPOGRAPHY

#70: I think borrowing the typography from one of the other designs which I annotated in the public forums would help...this one is too "space-age" I think....plus, I'd like the logo to be next to the title and be able to stand alone as a distinct logo and icon.

#53: Hi, I think there are too many gradations - it would be hard to print well on business cards or the web -- I am looking at a two-color card for now....plus, I don't know if the pyramid is distinct enough as a logo or conveys our value...

#57: hi, good effort, but I'm not seeing this work as an icon or logo. I think it is too unclear what that image stands for...it's not really a letter that's clear so it takes time for the brain to "process" but it's not a stand alone image. It looks like something from a digital watch. Thanks, but I think we need to get to something more "pictograph" or an actual logo

#45 : I see .what you're doing...the logo I think needs to be on the left, it needs to be simple enough that can be a small web-icon, two colors is what I am looking for so this has too many colors and thin lines....the notion of "networking" with "allies" I can see...but on a first look there are too many elements (lines, circles, small and large) to make this a clean web-icon/logo....the concepts you come up with do seem clean, but I think perhaps borrowing and combining your visual style with the comments I've made on others' in teh public forum will help.

#17: the typeface seemed too light, curvy, color scheme didn't match, seemed more for chidlren-consumer, typeface not right with puzzle, like the concept, too curvey and I need the icon/logo to be able to appear on the left.

#39: okay...something potentially here with this notion....what we do is enable "allies" to share hidden contacts with each other to improve their sales. That's the essence of it -- maybe a way to connote that the "small" rectangle is a contact (without putting detail) and there is an "exchange" going on....something seems here, except that right now on a quick look (which is how I look at icons/logos -- it should be distinct in a blink of an eye) it looks like two guppies swimming past each other. Also...I think the blue shading isn't right....too light or gradated.

#37: hi, I don't think this type of green or the font works -- see my comments on the public stream....this seems too "consumer" because it is round and too angular combined...this would be good for a comic strip or cartoon. The logo...interesting notion...it looks like an octopus or an alien at first glance --- and the green makes it doubly so.......see my comments on some ideas that are heading in the general direction that could help you....

#48: hi, I don't think the thin-lined circles within circles will give enough clarity as a "logo" and have too many colors. I'd like the effects to be "clean" and distinct so that they can be reproduced a small images on the web.