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for the contest Stylish Logo Needed - $400 + extras!!

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    #349
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    #218
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    #79
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    #78
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    #27
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    Fri, 11 Jul 2008 17:22:44 +0000
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    Submitted design #27

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    Sat, 12 Jul 2008 09:04:00 +0000
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    Hi

    Not bad at all - I like the way you're going here.

    It is creative, stylish, clean, elegant and simple.

    Try the following:

    Make it more Alive and vivid – it looks a little pale.

    Nice play with the RnB, but it needs to be easy to read.

    Sub text need to stand out more.

    Please make a .com version as well.

    Overall, very nice!

    Thanks

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    Sat, 12 Jul 2008 11:54:10 +0000
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    Submitted design #78

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    Sat, 12 Jul 2008 11:54:33 +0000
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    Submitted design #79

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    Sun, 13 Jul 2008 14:12:32 +0000
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    Hi

    #78

    It an interesting one and it got potential,

    Try these:

    q. Its fun and warm which is great,

    Now make it a bit more elegant

    Maybe go with 3 colors and not 4 ?

    2. The effect you used on the all logo is nice, but it makes it pale.

    Try making it stand out more.

    3. Illustration is really special and nice and I like the door thing,

    But it has too many colors.

    Try to elegant it a little.

    4. Sub text must stand out more.

    It is something I want to be seen clearly.

    Overall, nice and fun logo and it really feels warm.

    Try going with the changes and we can definitely get somewhere here.

    #79

    I less like it.

    I loved the RnB illustration, but it needs more work and I would be happy to see a different version if you like.

    The logo I liked less here.

    Thanks!

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    Tue, 15 Jul 2008 11:42:34 +0000
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    Submitted design #218

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    Thu, 17 Jul 2008 09:19:12 +0000
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    Hi

    Interesting change but I think I like #78 more,

    Try these:

    Illustration – put it on the left ( like #78 )

    Keep it the same as #78, only soften it / play with the colors to make it more clean.

    R and B – need to stand out more. Make it a little bigger then the casa

    Try a little more special font as well

    .com – make it stand out more

    Sub text – use capital – Your Online ….

    Sub text – must stand out more.

    Nice – but need the changes.

    Let me know if any questions

    Thanks !

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    Thu, 17 Jul 2008 12:13:50 +0000
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    Submitted design #349

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