Designs by jansum

for the contest "Become a Bounty Hunter" Website Needs Complete Redesign

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  1. Web Page Design by jansum
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    #9
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    3 Stars
  2. Web Page Design by jansum
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    #4
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    2 Stars

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    ScottHarrell
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    Wed, 09 Jul 2008 22:11:24 +0000
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    Thank you for the second submission.

    I REALLY LIKE the magnifying glass and foot image- that is very appropriate. This submission is a marked improvement over the first.

    The color is better and the layout is clean.

    Considering the creativity I am seeing in recent submissions I think that we are moving away from the basic layout and movign towards something a little different.

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    jansum
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    Tue, 08 Jul 2008 09:38:07 +0000
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    Submitted design #9

    re-designed draft

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    ScottHarrell
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    Mon, 07 Jul 2008 23:08:45 +0000
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    Thank you for your submission, jansum.

    I like your use of color here the primary colors work well with each other.

    I like the top nav bar and the proposed rollover effect.

    Some things that need to be changed. The welcome area is not nearly big enough. In order to accomplish that we would need to move the "Free Introduction" box to the right below the Course Updates box and the "returning students" box need only be big enough to say something to the effect "Returning Students Click Here" That can be moved off to the left immediately under the side navigation. By doing this the main body text can be extended all the way down.

    I'd prefer to see the side navigation to use buttons of some type or maybe something more appealing than the font and size you've used.

    The header is not really working for me as it does not seem to flow well together or really meet the theme of bail enforcement/bounty hunting. The black and white BeABountyHunter.com logo looks out of place.

    Thanks for your submission.

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    jansum
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    Mon, 07 Jul 2008 11:16:04 +0000
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    Submitted design #4

    initial draft, vertical navigation has a fly out for sub-menu

    thanks

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