for the contest Landing Page - Blank Ready to Fill in
Submitted design #19
Hi there ch! Here's my design hope you like this one! This is my first enrty, just tell me what you need...anytime here! :-)
Hi,
Love the yellow and green - cool.
Needs more curves though and perhaps a cleaner/clearer deliniation of the different areas.
Remember - in the header I'm going to paste in a product photo and headings ...
Perhaps play at turning the straight edges you have on the yellow to sweeping curves ...
Great so far --- looking forward to seeing more.
best,
Vic
Submitted design #25
Hello..this is my revision..:-) hope you like it!
Miss the green! ;-)
Lose the border around the whole design ...
Header - can you liven the shape up - 'out of the box' more
http://www.designfirms.org/portfolios/view/873/havoc-interactive/ga-wright-marketing-website/164/
Keep it going!
Vic
No problem, w8 for my revision Thanks! :-)
Hi CH! Good Day! i create 3 new layouts as for my revision to my previous design, hope you like the new shape i created :-) Thanks
Submitted design #46
Here's a new layout banner for my revision!
Submitted design #47
change color! :-)
Submitted design #48
new shape for banner :-)
Submitted design #55
Hi Ch..i created a gradient here in my new design and new look for the centre, :-)
Submitted design #56
change color :-)
Submitted design #57
with a little change of footer.,,:-)
Hi,
Many thanks for the updates ...
Okay --- the more natural greens you have on #48 and #19 work much better - stick with those greens. Also keep it white at the bottom of the top graphic shape.
The centre section is too loud - it needs to be much lighter - also make it one section, with the text divided 2/3 left space 1/3 right.
Bottom section - good, lose the graphic above the buy button - and make the buy button stronger and more rectangular.
Many thanks!
Vic
Submitted design #74
Hi there! CH! thanks for you feedback, i'm very glad with your comment about my designs, i'm very much open for it! just tell me what you want...hope you like this one! thanks! :-)
Hi,
Thanks for your feedback! Appreciated.
Okay ... getting there!
Header ...
Have you got a single round white bottle you can use instead of the glass bottles you are using - would help me visualize more easily - thanks.
Otherwise the shape is great! Could you brighten up the green a small amount though, thanks.
Centre section ...
Can you lose that photo on the left, thanks.
Bottom section ...
Lose the Paypal logo, thanks.
Could you swap the buy now button that you have in the latest one with the more square one you used in the first designs please - making it a mid green of the header.
Great!
Many thanks,
Vic
Submitted design #86
Hi! there VIC! it's a wow...first i want to say thank you for the effort that you given us for the immediate feedback and all the good comments, we really appreciate that...of course for having a second prize, it's very cool ... Thank you very much! you're such a nice person! :-) Well I just finish my revision hope you like it! :-)
Hi,
Apologies for delay --- I'm in the UK here.
Okay ...
The green ... can you make it more natural, (#46) a bit too ... fake.
Buy box ... doesn't work does it ... make it solid and sharp, stronger green than the revised header.
Could you try a light gradient (fading out down) behind centre section. Make sure there is a gap between all sections - white space.
Many thanks!
Vic
PS. Thanks for your feedback on me!!
Submitted design #111
Hi there Vic, here's my revision! i hope i i'm not too late hehe.....thanks! :-)
Submitted design #112
banner change :-)
Hi,
Better!
If there is time, can you put some white space between the centre section and bottom section, and lighten the grey in the centre section.
Thanks,
Vic
Lose the leaf on #112.
My previous comment was on #111
Submitted design #114
design changes..:-)
Hi,
Sorry --- must not have explained clearly ;-)
White space between grey section and buy now section.
Lose the leaf.
Lighten the grey.
best,
Vic
Submitted design #118
hehe..hope this work :-)
Cutting it fine!
Nice work - thanks!!
Best,
Vic