for the contest Landing Page - Blank Ready to Fill in
Submitted design #31
Hi
here is mine, hope you like it
if you need any adjustments let me know
Thanks
Quanita
Hi,
Colours cool ... could be stronger.
Can you get rid of some of the straight lines ...
Happy to have white space inbetween the 3 areas.
Lose the graphic in the header.
Great start - keep it up!
Best,
Vic
Submitted design #32
Hi Vic,
thanks for the feedback, here are my changes...
Its a little scary letting go of straight lines :)
How is this one doing?
Thanks
Quanita
"its a little scary letting go of straight lines" ... but isn't it Fun!
Okay --- much better ...
Can you get rid of the headlines for now --- not sure of the fonts and they are distracting. Let's work on the shapes/colours/movement first ...
Colours ... could you try some different colours now ... not sure that the blue and orange/yellow work ...
Whatbout the orange on it'w own... or go to green and blue.
Many thanks for your hard work.
best,
Vic
Thanks for the quick feedback its getting late here so I may only put up the next one tomorrow. But will do the whole visualisation thing too and see how I go.
Submitted design #34
ok... still up
here is the super orange version :)
Submitted design #37
Blue & Green Version
Submitted design #39
slightly different blue green
#34 is better ... but lose that fade you added in the white area ...
Could you make the concave box on the left taller?
Thanks,
Vic
Submitted design #54
Hi
here are the changes to the orange one
I assume you meant the box on the 'other' left
they can be any size you like.
Let me know if its going in the right direction
Thanks
Quanita
Hi Quanita,
Great, thanks ... if you're happy for some more alterations:
Okay ... lose the top smaller box.
Is it possible to 'move' the design over to the right, so the background design is narrower on the right? About a third the width that is currently - and then lose the checkboxes.
Could you try a bright strong yellow/green as I mentioned earlier ...
Also (if you can) look at this link (I've mentioned it on the contest page)
http://www.designfirms.org/portfolios/view/873/havoc-interactive/ga-wright-marketing-website/164/- any chance of similar linear textures?
Many many thanks,
Vic
Hi Vic
thanks so much for all the suggestions and feedback this has been a lot of fun, good luck with your decision!
Thanks
Quanita
Submitted design #82
more (probably from time zone differences final) changes
Submitted design #93
changed it again, I didnt like my first attempt at grid lines
Hi,
Many thanks for your great efforts!
Haven't quite got there - but I will be having many more contests and look forward to seeing your entries then!
Take care,
Vic