for the contest Logo for parent company "JR Associates, LLC"
Submitted design #8
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Very elegant. Thanks for your entry. But when reduced it loses the "J" in JR, and looks just like an elegant "R". It would work well as letterhead where it is big enough and printed clearly. I need it for website and for woven garment label. Also the half tone of the url becomes indistinct and hard to read even at medium sizes and unreadable in small sizes.
Submitted design #16
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Submitted design #17
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#16 is dynamite! It reflects an artistic flavor in the block letters reminiscent of illuminated script or stone carved ancient calligraphy. The font says sophistication and grace. It is clear and can be reduced while retaining clarity. It could be used with any color way, especially if modified to gray and black.
#17 is good too, although the two colors of brown as ground in the circle seem arbitrary. Why two colors, not just one? Also the larger, gray version without the JR in front of the word "Associates" seems to miss that JR, even though it is in the circle part very clearly.
Our web site designer and my wife both wondered (independently) if you could split the circle "JR" similarly to the #16 block letter?
Thanks! and best regards,
Jon Rose
Submitted design #41
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We like the circle better with only one color. And also like the one on the right better when you include the "JR" in front of "Associates". Thanks for modifying them, it definitely improves the concept. I think we won't use this concept though. The JR in the circle seems not centered to my eye. Thanks again. Jon