for the contest One-page Corporate Design: Top 3 winners paid
Submitted design #18
My entry :-D
Thanks for the entry. Overall it's good.
-I really like the way you did the page title. I've seen a few other alternatives, this is another good way to do it. I think I'd like to see it attached to the bottom of the image (so it's less obviously interfering with the image)
-I'd like to see the menu along the bottom of the image somehow. If there was a single point for navigation / position information (the breadcrumbs is the other) that might be good. I'm not sure about this, but I'd like to see the option. Then the menu also doesn't cover the image (but then it covers some content...)
-I like the page title in the body area & the sub-head.
-I don't like the right-hand area boxes. Good idea, but the outline & the corners I don't love. Also some indicator (icon or otherwise) for the link or the boxes in general would be good.
-I'm not sure how I feel about the dark background - I realize that this is integral to the design, so I'm not sure what can be done - I welcome ideas.
Good start.