for the contest Medical Specialty Website Design
Submitted design #3
hi here i submit the home page and i am expecting feedback from ur side as soon as possible. Inner page also i submit soon.
thanks
Design #3 - nice starting effort on this. It's clean and easy to look at.
A few changes.
1) The banner area is a bit too deep (the green and the image of the docs). Shrink it about 40%.
2) The green with waves is a little overpowering. Maybe change the color on it.
3) Remove the tagline "We care..." Put the following in the banner somewhere - "DVT-Expert.org/StanfordRadiology"
4) Change the "About DVT" tab and homepage item to read "Latest on DVT"
5) Change all instances of "Read more" and "Read Full Article" to "More" and "Full Article"
6) Change the Contact Us photo to the photo called out in the elements page I put in the brief.
7) Remove "Contact Us" from the tab up top.
8) Change "Welcome" to "Stanford Radiology"
9) Replace photo under Welcome to photo called out in the elements page I put in the brief
Submitted design #9
Here is the design with changes
#9 - looking good. A couple of changes:
1) Remove the DVT Expert.org plus logo and name up top.
2) In green header - "DVT-Expert.org/StanfordRadiology"
Submitted design #12
here the design with changes.
Almost there...#12.
1) You didn't remove the DVT Expert.org up in the top left. Remove it.
2) Change the "/StanfordRadiology" part to more of a gray. So it still looks like part of the "DVT-Expert.org" part.
3) Tighten up the spacing under "DVT in the News" - specifically with the "Full Article" boxes. Maybe move them in tighter into the text?
Thanks for your submissions and hard work on this. I think in the end we were looking for something slightly different. We were having trouble figuring out what we would do when we got rid of the bug in the upper left (which we needed to do). Thanks again!