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For contest Flash animated header needed, held by PixelPaul in the Other Graphic Design category.

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    Wed, 18 Jun 2008 16:19:52 +0000
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    I don't mean any offense, but the way it's worded right now doesn't make sense. "Families" is the plural of "family." "Your comfort is our families tradition" sounds like you are comparing two possesive clauses ("your" and "family's"), but isn't written that way. If you mean the tradition belongs to multiple families, an apostrophe should follow "families" to indicate possession rather that plurality.