for the contest Lead Generation --> Sales Page Webpage Needed
Submitted design #6
Hi! Here is my entry, feedback appreciated, thanks!
Hi Roland,
It's looking awesome so far!
I really like how clean you've made it.
Could we try these things:
1. Make space for a headline above the video that says something like:
"Discover The 'Sneaky Little Trick' I Used To
Make $642.71 In 3 Days On The Internet!"
2. Add something to call attention to the sign up form. Like, in the drawing I had that little arrow, but what do you think would work well?
Also, what ideas did you have for the sales page on the second page?
Thanks!
Jordan
Submitted design #8
Hi! here is the updated homepage, working on the sales page right now. Thanks!
Roldan
Submitted design #9
Hi! Here is the proposed inside page. Let me know if you have any updates. Thanks!
Roldan
Hi Roland,
I'm very impressed. On the front page, lets try a different arrow there, but the headline looks excellent.
This inside page is brilliant. Perfect.
The only thing with the front page: is there a good way to make it just a *tad* longer, so that it looks just a little bit more the length of a sheet of paper than a square?
Thanks!
Submitted design #12
Hi! Here is the updated design. Let me know what you think please. Thanks!
Roldan
Hi Roldan,
Looks very good. Can we experiment with a few more arrow variations?
Also, I like the way it looks now very much, and I would like to keep this version, but could we also try adding little note pages in the margins on the table next to the folder where peoples testimonials would be?
Something like this:
http://caytonphotography.com/blog/uploaded_images/notebook-753005.jpg
This is just a thought. I don't know if it will work right.
Thanks!
Jordan
Submitted design #13
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Awesome! This is exactly what I want. Do you need to do some css and all of that to finish it up?
Thanks!
Jordan
If you select me as the winner I can start working on the html (css layout) part asap :)
best,
Roldan
Ok, done!
