for the contest ATAK Interactive Logo Upgrade
Submitted design #76
first entry
Pretty cool Roktiv. Very well thought out. I will have comments later today for you.
one quick comment is that the panther could maybe use another hind leg like you did with the front legs (there are 2)
Submitted design #79
more powerfull version with different color combos and some kind of flash preloader
Submitted design #80
one more iteration
Thank you for adjusting, you are getting the direction but the body is not there yet. I don't like the whiskers(remove)and i don't feel like the back leg is shaped right, it is just awkward and needs to be refined more(subtle like the 2nd front leg).
We are looking to get a more substantial panther if you could fill out the body more and give him a feeling of strength instead of speed. It almost looks like his stomach is cut out.
#80 is really getting there. did not see it before my previous comment, please apply my comments to that as well.
we dont like the bold designs in red and we dont like the new effect you put on font (shine). We just dont like the shine and liked it better before.
One piece of feedback came to us and said maybe the panther is a little too tall...?
Submitted design #81
new one with differnt back and legs lines
We really like this version (the boss especially). Only comment so far is that maybe the ATAK part is not tall enough and makes the logo look a little awkward because tall on right and not as tall on left...
Do you have any solution here?
someone said that the neck makes it look like a horse and not a panther...is there anything you can do for that?
The mouth is a lot better. I’m just curious of what it would look like with an eye. Is that too much to ask for? If it does not look good do not send...we would like to see with and without if you do think it looks good.
(we are pretty certain this is the logo that will win)
in progress to last comment above this one...the only big problem is that it does not yet look like a panther and more like a horse...the first was more like a dog (like grayhound)
This idea is great but we need the right effects on the animal so its a panther...(the nmouth looks good now)
BOSS/OWNER COMMENTS: I really like the newest version (81) in black and silver. (we can use red version for something else later maybe)
The only problem is that the panther looks like a horse and not a panther...maybe its the neck/head shape...maybe its the hind legs...maybe its proportion of everything like head to neck to ears to legs...but we need a PANTHER...not a horse.
Last comment is that maybe ATAK can be a little taller. Everything needs to just come together with the concept of this designer. I may be worried that the right side is taller than left side and am wondering if this would look better (or not) if was same size as the ATAK...
We just want it perfect. Get this designers contact information as well for corporate branding if we decide this is the logo (which we are pretty sure will happen with the right clean up) This was what we asked for as far as style and this person delivered.
Nice Job.
Submitted design #90
new version
Submitted design #91
new one
We really like this! BUT, you are still getting it all wrong with the neck/feet/body...it looks more like a horse and it is missing a second back leg (even if it is tiny aspect to show there is 2nd back leg)
What can you do to finish this to make it look like a panther? A horse and panther have different body types so look at what a panther looks like when he is lunging...look at the feet, look at the back and neck, look at the features...
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Submitted design #94
edited panther variations
Submitted design #97
one more
97 is bad...we deleted.
94 is MUCH better (bottom one) but still needs cleanup that we wish you would catch.
1. Please clean up the K like the other ones...we do not like that little dip you have there now where the K intersects...the tail came off better before.
2. Please open the mouth more so attacking like a panther...now its just too soft...you had it better before and maybe you can tilt the head up a bit also.
3. Give panther small eye.
Submitted design #98
edited panther
Submitted design #99
doubled legs and tail changed
Well done! We love it...
Is there anything you would clean up to make even better? Anything at all would be appreciated to finalize.
We looked at Puma Logo and want you to see if you can make any more realistic the panther in any way? Are there any final touches you would do?
If not, ok...but this is final cleanup opportunity...
oh...by the way we like 98
new 99 is really good
99 is great...if you would like to do anything else fine...if not fine also...
everyone says neck is awkward and still a HORSE neck...
and say maybe the front legs are a drop too short (but i dont see this problem(
if you look at #5 you can see what a better neck is...right now its just not sharp enough and looks like a horse neck.
sorry if you look at #95
you may skype me if you would like to chat at atakinteractivedavid
Submitted design #100
a little more muscles added
Submitted design #102
adjusted neck
FINAL COMMENTS:
We like the muscle in 100 but makes his legs look a little too short...we like the addition but then need to fix legs (make a little longer.
On 102 the neck is a bit better but add the muscle from #100
The back leg is just a bit close to teh "i" in "interactive"
Submitted design #103
edited legs
AWESOME!
if we pick this design, how do we get a hold of you?
someone said the #105 panther silhouette looks like a panther/cat (body, and proportions of everything) and yours does not yet (they say it looks like a bull)...also the face looks better on 105 because looks like a cat howling...and not a bull with an open mouth...
You are just missing it with what a CAT should look like.
worse comes to worse we can always take your PSD, but i am hoping you can get this there.
Submitted design #113
adjusted head and body
Submitted design #114
different neck line
much better.