for the contest Massage Co Business Card & Logo revamp
Submitted design #7
hello :))
Submitted design #8
2 design
Submitted design #9
3 design
Submitted design #10
another try :)
#7 Loving your interpretation of the sketch!! It makes it easy for me to explain the "balance" element replicated in your use of green and orange in the triangle. Very cool.
I also like the flow of the colours green, orange and light orange - it's relaxing and flowing. I like how it almost reflects and mirrors the flow in the triangle.
My only concern is legibility of the contact info; can I see a version with the contact info in the top right corner, but still distinguish his name and title?
#9 - too boxy
#10 - the logo is very interesting.. hmm might like the one in #7 better. The layout of number #10 is very innovative, but I don't think it conveys the relaxing flowing balance of your #8 and #7 - it's almost too aggressive.
Would love to see a "back" design as well. You're doing well.
#7 Love the font you chose for the contact info. Looks exotic, inline with the "chai" feeling, yet clean and professional. I also like the fact that you're using grey and not black. So far I prefer the symbol beside the textlogo rather than on top of it
thanks :)
I will work in revisions :)
#7 one other thing and I'll leave you alone :) Move the logo to the right corner so it can have the spotlight with some white space around it.
ok no problem thanks :)
Submitted design #11
new revisions
but I have a ?
do you need back and front of the business card.
I can do that or just the front. :)
Submitted design #12
back of the cards
Hi, yes I need a back and front. Thank you for your revisions, I'll present my favourites to my client on Tuesday.
As far as I'm concerned, you are in my top three, so I'll keep you posted of his comments & decision.
Thank you!
thanks I will designing a better back design :)
Submitted design #23
back & front
please let me know what will be better the gray lettering or this one.
thanks :)
#23 All I can say is WOW! The top left design and top/lower right designs are amazing! I'm liking these swirls much more than the lower left one in 23, the lower right in 11 or the business card in #8
I think you were right in your first design having the chaitext/logo aligned to the left - the version where I asked you to move it now looks like it's floating. I just noticed the variation of the triangle logo in #11 - very nice.
Ok - this is excellent. I'll reserve any further comments until he sees them - he's the one that matters :)
thanks :)
Submitted design #33
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Submitted design #34
back side variation.