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for the contest JamBuzzer.com Site Design, BIG-TIME STUFF...

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    #33
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    2 Stars
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    #14
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    1 Stars
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    #13
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    1 Stars
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    #8
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    Sat, 07 Jun 2008 02:51:59 +0000
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    ok. But I would still like to know exactly what you do and dont like about it. Calling it novice work doesn't really help the design. Should I just move along?

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    Sat, 07 Jun 2008 02:40:04 +0000
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    it still doesnt have the professional look to it. the graphics must be clean and look like more thann just shiny boxes. it should be so hot and the graphics should be so tight that no one who doesn't have a solid understanding of graphic design can't duplicate it. as it is now, it is easily duplicatable by a novice.

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    Sat, 07 Jun 2008 02:15:31 +0000
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    #33 is definitely in a better direction, but still not quite there yet. continue on the road! ;)

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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 23:58:53 +0000
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    Submitted design #33

    New entry
    //changed a lot of stuff this time. Going for a different look. Is this in a better direction for you? are there elements you dislike? please PM me your response:)

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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 07:25:27 +0000
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    while i do see improvement, it still needs to be a bit more interesting and professional. it has to scream 'bookmark me and visit me everyday!' and its just not doing that yet. #6 by cybertronic is doing the best job so far in the contest

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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 05:53:18 +0000
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    Submitted design #14

    Less green more black and red.

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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 05:25:05 +0000
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    Submitted design #13

    New entry. Feedback is great. Tell me what you like so I can keep it. Tell me what you dislike so I can trash it. Just a side note. Jmillgraphics and I have teamed up to bring you a site design w/ icons and splash page and whatever more you want.

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    AaronBeats
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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 03:10:28 +0000
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    yes if we could try out rounded corners and more glaze, then that might help. also, some of the text could be smaller

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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 01:37:52 +0000
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    would you like some rounded corners? more or less glaze? different colors? Answers to those questions really really help:)

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    AaronBeats
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    Fri, 06 Jun 2008 01:30:47 +0000
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    again, don't feel like you have to make it match the layout in the drawing, that is merely an idea and map for what should be included on the page.

    while the look is easy to use, it still has an amateurish look to it. i understand that it is still in draft format. what we should work on is making it really pop by breaking out of the basic square look. check out some of the sites we like;)