Designs by Senjula
for the contest Print design for one-page sales brochure
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- Fri, 30 May 2008 19:18:24 +0000
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Re: #1
The interoperability diagram doesn’t seem to tie the items together (which is what it's meant to illustrate) -- also, I'm afraid I'm not a fan of its shape. The curve at the bottom also strays too close to the edge of the text to its left, causing too much tension between the right angle and the curve. Overall, it's too dark -- especially with the gray gradient down the left. I'm going to eliminate this one, but thanks for submitting!
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- Thu, 29 May 2008 19:58:05 +0000
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I meant I am trying to incorporate, not that you should ;)
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- Thu, 29 May 2008 19:11:49 +0000
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Submitted design #1
Thanks for looking :)
try to incorporate elements of your logo.
Kimb
http://www.senjula.com
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