Designs by Klip

for the contest Social networking site needs 2 key pages

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    #21
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    Klip
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    Sat, 31 May 2008 12:57:27 +0000
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    Submitted design #59

    Last one for me

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    NathanielMc
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    Wed, 28 May 2008 15:55:14 +0000
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    OK, we are worried about the fonts. See our general comment in the discussion about the whole contest.

    Also, the robot hand is creepy. see comment 4) above for feedback.

    The color is better but the design is a little plain. however, I think that we could use a little contrast to highlight the key elements. See #12 for some inspiration. Three buttons "fix" and "improve" are the critical call to actions. Also, the box tab labels could be in a different color.

    This is moving in the right direction, but I think these changes would help a lot.

    Looking forward to the next version!

    - Mike

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    Wed, 28 May 2008 15:19:49 +0000
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    Submitted design #21

    The second try. Now as for the color scheme, the PSD built so, that you can change the color by fill one single layer

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    Tue, 27 May 2008 16:53:17 +0000
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    Hi Klip,

    Mike here, a member of the Yasnap team.

    What I like so far in your design:
    1) the use of translucency to separate the content boxes from the background
    2) the two column format with a wide main content area

    What I would I like to see change:
    3) the color isn't working for me - not a fan of brown. Team yasnap has got to give people more guidance on color, but brown doesn't seem fun enough to me
    4) i am intrigued by the idea of some graphical element in the banner, but the puzzle piece is too hackneyed for me. I think something more conceptual than realistic could be appropriate, or at least cartoonish
    5) doesn't seem like a web 2.0 font to me - looking for something more fun
    6) check out some of the other designs in this competition for ways to prioritize the content, especially in the viriality statistics. The call to action is especially important

    Thanks and I'm looking forward to your revisions!

    - Mike

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    Tue, 27 May 2008 07:32:06 +0000
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    Submitted design #13

    There is a details page, if you'll like it, the other one will be folowed