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- Mon, 19 May 2008 00:40:01 +0000
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This an excellent first shot...I really like the lay out....If you could make the tan area on the front of the card: "The purpose Retired At 32..." bigger, so it is more readable....make it as big as you can without affecting the overall layout that you have....
The back of the card with writing is excellent....I think I can rewrite that to something that is the copy I would want each person to see....