Designs by offiri0

for the contest Refer a Friend cards

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  1. Stationery Design by offiri0
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  2. Stationery Design by offiri0 Eliminated
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  5. Stationery Design by offiri0 Eliminated
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    Mon, 19 May 2008 09:54:28 +0000
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    Submitted design #45

    i dont know what you mean
    i copied now again what it wrote in the brief

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    Mon, 19 May 2008 04:41:22 +0000
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    #21 - still full of typing errors.
    The following words in your design are wrong:
    Wer'e
    Australias'

    Also the punctuation is not as specified in the brief, you've put exclamation marks at the end of every sentence.

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    Fri, 16 May 2008 09:06:37 +0000
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    Submitted design #21

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    Fri, 16 May 2008 08:59:39 +0000
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    Submitted design #20

    with all black text in back side of the card

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    Fri, 16 May 2008 08:52:32 +0000
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    Submitted design #19

    i dont know realy what you mean because i did copy this
    and now i copied from what you wrote here so i hope it's ok

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    Fri, 16 May 2008 08:40:45 +0000
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    you want me to do this in one line every sentence?

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    Kate Morris
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    Fri, 16 May 2008 00:47:39 +0000
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    #2 - MUCH better - although there are still typos. Please cut and paste the copy directly from the brief:

    Shop, chat, learn and discover on Australia’s best beauty site.

    We’re 100% Australian owned and operated, and we rely on word of mouth to grow.

    If you enjoyed your experience with us, please support us by passing on this card and telling your friends!

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    Thu, 15 May 2008 06:46:44 +0000
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    Submitted design #2

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    Kate Morris
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    Thu, 15 May 2008 02:42:05 +0000
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    #1 - few typo's there:
    "We're" (not "Wer'e")
    "Please support us *by* passing on this card" (you've left out "by")
    "Australia's" (not "Australias'")

    Re the design itself - the blue fade is nice, but the black bits on the front look a bit too button-y - maybe better as an unbroken strip of black? and along the top, like in the website design?

    Also not keen on the use of different font colours or sizes within the same sentence (as in "100%" and "best"); or the stripey effect on the back.

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    Wed, 14 May 2008 11:50:21 +0000
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    Submitted design #1

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