Designs by penflare

for the contest Logo for Dojo Learning

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    #43
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    2 Stars
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    #42
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    #36
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    Mon, 12 May 2008 23:19:35 +0000
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    Submitted design #3

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    lux
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    Tue, 13 May 2008 03:00:34 +0000
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    I like the layout and the 3D aspects, but after seeing a few ideas we're thinking the name should be all in lowercase. Less formal that way :)

    The middle looks off. Typically when folded, the paper meets all the way at the bottom of the middle, so there wouldn't be a visible base. Hope that helps.

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    Tue, 13 May 2008 06:27:09 +0000
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    I think the edges could be rounded a bit too to make it more fun, similar to #19.

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    Tue, 13 May 2008 14:13:32 +0000
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    Submitted design #36

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    lux
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    Tue, 13 May 2008 16:29:44 +0000
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    Looks much better. I think the edges could be slightly rounded though so it doesn't look so sharp. Also still not sold on the font. Looks much better lowercase, but the square and odd angled d, n and g seem off compared to the rounded o's. Maybe something with more rounded letters so the d matches the o.

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    Tue, 13 May 2008 17:02:21 +0000
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    Submitted design #42

    soft

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    Tue, 13 May 2008 17:02:44 +0000
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    Submitted design #43

    more fonts

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    lux
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    Tue, 13 May 2008 20:45:26 +0000
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    For the font, I think the bold dojo from the top and non-bold learning from the bottom might work well together.

    I'm wondering if edges more like what #45 has might work better for the outlines, and maybe a bit more definition in the red one as well. For the mid-line edges of orange and blue, it might look closer to a real one if they met the corners where orange meets green and green meets blue, since that's where the sections meet for real.