for the contest personal journal website needs design
Submitted design #3
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Submitted design #4
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Ryan: There are actually 5 different people involved in the descision process, so I added my name at the beginning so that you know whose comment this is.
I think you have a good start. I like the long rectangle that holds the text concerning what this website is about. We need an actual logo though for the Password Savior part in the upper left, and I would prefer that art assets be drawn out rather then using photos, so I would change the hands holding up the motto. I'm just not a fan of photo based art for this particular project. Also, there needs to be login controls somewhere and the page. Note that as of now we are looking at the actual login/password boxes and a login button, not a link to a login page. There should also be a learn more button somewhere.
Those are some suggestions to start with, I'm very interested to see what you come up with.
In reference to Design #3
Bobby: Hey there. Like Ryan, I am one of the five able to comment and give feedback about your design.
I like the start you have, esspecially the black rectangle that holds the prominant information. I also like the word choice, Write, Store, and Access as this gives the feeling of "inviting" and "simple". However, we do need an actual logo for our page instead of just saying "Password Savior".
This is a good start and I look forward to seeing more of your work. Thanks!
In reference to Design #3.
Ryan: Hey, thanks for the comment on the main page mutter, I wasn't aware that a lot of the web design guys weren't logo guys as well. With that in mind, keep tweaking the layout then, and we can worry about the logo another time. I do like where you're going with your design. Also, it's good to hear that you to xhtml/CSS as well, as if we choose your design, that would really cut down on my workload (I'm doing the backend). We would of course work out a price for your coding skills as well if we decided to go that route. I'm looking forward to seeing your next revision
Cory:
Mutter, I actually like the "photo" hands holding the sign up, so I disagree with Ryan completely on that point, I don't want animated or artsy hands in place of what you have. The rest I agree with.
Submitted design #8
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Submitted design #9
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