for the contest Wowsa Design for Custom Jewelry Designer
Submitted design #5
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Submitted design #6
About the Artist Page
Submitted design #9
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Submitted design #10
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Muttur, the client is having trouble visualizing #6. Here's his comment:
"too much text. Not an intro page. Not focused on the work itself."
I understand that this wasn't intended to be an intro page, and we could focus on the work itself by using a product photo instead of Ben's picture. He really likes #5, which would be a good intro page, so I think there's hope here!
His comments on #5:
"is impressive, like the empty space. Captures the design and movement of the piece. Liked it"
That's very high praise, so this is definitely in the running.
More feedback from ben: "#475995 and #475994 These are favorite together, as home page and bio page. The gracefulness of the one piece as the feature has a lot of impact. I like the impact of the empty space with the strong one design. Rate these a # 5. "
