for the contest Ad for Business 2 Business show program - $200.00 prize
Submitted design #12
One more ad_design with few changes..
Regarding design #12
This looks good.
There are spaces after each apostrophe (don' t) - please rempve those spaces so that they read like this: "don't".
IN the grey to the left of the copier, change "ALLIED Office Machines..." to "Allied Office Machines...".
Remove the bubble and the text in the bottom right corner where it saysn "*FREE - this superb..."
Remove the white border from around the copier.
Where is says "BUY A NEW COPIER/PRINTER FROM ALLIED BY THE END OF MARCH AND..." change this to "BUY A NEW COPIER/PRINTER FROM ALLIED BY THE END OF MARCH 2007 AND..."
The gradient along the bottom border, please make this match the gradient where you have "Great Service ALLIED to the best prices"
The text ">FIND OUT MORE ON STAND 40", can you make it more prominent? Maybe make the font red?
Regarding design #12
We atre going to declare this as the winning design, providing you make the above adjustments and the file is ready to be sent to the publisher and adheres to the specification. If you are unsure about ANY aspect of the specification, please let me know so that I can help you.
Well done and many thanks.