Designs by Jonas G. Stensgaard
for the contest Pervasive DataSolutions Redesign
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- Mon, 05 May 2008 23:09:12 +0000
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This is much better, I do want people to follow the wireframe, you have done that, did not mean to cuase to confusion...
But I also wanted to get a certian feel, I think you are acomplishing that with your latest.
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- Mon, 05 May 2008 15:31:30 +0000
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Submitted design #15
I'm a little confused though.. didn't you want people to follow your wireframe?
Anyways, I added a few things like other people have.. what exactly do you want? Hmm..
Also added the hover effect you wished for. -
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- Sun, 04 May 2008 20:29:30 +0000
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Better, but still the same problem with repetitive design, need someway to distinguish without losing symmetry, its a tough problem...did you think about the highlighting by rollover idea any? I know you don't code this stuff only mockups, but maybe you could illustrate the effect?
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- Sun, 04 May 2008 12:56:53 +0000
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Submitted design #3
1st revision.. Changed it so there's more difference. :)
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- Sat, 03 May 2008 18:26:01 +0000
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I like the colors, they are closer to the pervasive.com site...
Not sure I like the quadrant thing goingn on on the right, but like the ide of a highlited product on the left.
I think it is the sheer repetitive nature of the quadrant thing that makes me not like it, the Buy Now and More Informaiotn buttons are great, but when grouped together like that it is too cookie cutter, no? Begins to be boring and I find myself looking the repetitive nature of the layout instead of the content....any ideas there? Maybe shrink them, or have them illuminate to full color on hover? Show one blck with the buttons full color and then the other three in a dim or even B&W? Just ideas to think about.
Good first entry looking forward to more from you.
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- Sat, 03 May 2008 13:39:46 +0000
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Submitted design #2
My first draft at this.. hope you like it.
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