Designs by Lyte

for the contest Illustration of two teenagers

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  1. Label:
    #24
    Rating:
    3 Stars
  2. #23 Winning Design
  3. Label:
    #13
    Rating:
    4 Stars
  4. Label:
    #12
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    0 Stars
  5. Label:
    #11
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  6. Label:
    #10
    Rating:
    4 Stars
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    #9
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    #7
    Rating:
    3 Stars
  9. Label:
    #5
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    3 Stars
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    #4
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    0 Stars
  11. Label:
    #2
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  1. Submitted design #2

    is this the look you are thinking? a fusion style (traditional meets anime approach) this is just a sketch, i'll be able to vectorize everything on the tablet, but i just want to make sure of the look first...

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    Lyte
    Comment Date
    Mon, 28 Apr 2008 23:24:08 +0000
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  2. Hi Lyte; thanks for the sketch. Tough to tell if this will work with such a rough sketch. My initial reaction is that the kids are too cartoon-y.

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    Comment Date
    Tue, 29 Apr 2008 05:20:52 +0000
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  3. Submitted design #4

    okay, this is a little more detailed, but there is lots more detailed to come when the line art starts. will you tell me any changes you would like before i start vectorizing this bad boi on the tablet.

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    Tue, 29 Apr 2008 21:02:36 +0000
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  4. Some comments:

    more "all-american" so means that girl is less sexy [put some clothes on her ;-) ] guy should be less snarky.

    take a look at this stock photo for the "feel" of the kids:
    http://tinyurl.com/5t6ewq

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    Tue, 29 Apr 2008 22:36:36 +0000
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  5. Submitted design #5

    okay, here's another approach. is this closer to the vibe?

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 00:02:26 +0000
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  6. #5 getting closer for sure. I would say less physically perfect/buff (bodies) and the girl needs an more approachable face (like the boy's, whose face has the right vibe.

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 00:32:44 +0000
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  7. Submitted design #7

    okay, another shot at the girl. it might be easier to do these one at a time with you just for direction's sake. thoughts?

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 16:30:56 +0000
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  8. #7 girl is much better, thanks. if you are ready to turn the kids into a vector drawing with coloring, then go ahead! thx

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 19:08:06 +0000
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  9. One more comment: when you go to vector, do try to take their sexiness and mischievousness down another notch.

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 19:16:23 +0000
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  10. Submitted design #9

    i did two versions, and i think you'd probably like the one on the right, but just wanted to make sure before i start coloring.

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 21:15:26 +0000
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  11. #9 You are correct. We like the younger one.

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 21:30:15 +0000
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  12. Submitted design #10

    Teen Girl finished. Let me know your thoughts.

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 22:55:19 +0000
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  13. I like it a lot. The expression is extremely close but not prefect, but everything else is terrific. Nice job.

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    Comment Date
    Thu, 01 May 2008 07:04:35 +0000
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  14. Submitted design #11

    okay, here's a rough sketch of the guy. feel free to make some comments about stuff you want changed. thanks!

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    Thu, 01 May 2008 16:30:21 +0000
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  15. #11 Actually like the boy in #5 better. I would say we go with #5 face with a slightly less muscular body.

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    Thu, 01 May 2008 18:01:43 +0000
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  16. Submitted design #12

    ready for vectoring?

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    Thu, 01 May 2008 23:28:55 +0000
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  17. don't worry about the small proportion blemishes on him, that stuff i can clean up when i do a more detailed rendering, but i just want to make sure it has the right vibe.

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    Comment Date
    Thu, 01 May 2008 23:30:25 +0000
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  18. #12 he's great. ready for vectoring

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    Comment Date
    Fri, 02 May 2008 06:41:35 +0000
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  19. Submitted design #13

    final

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    Comment Date
    Fri, 02 May 2008 17:18:51 +0000
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  20. #13 thx!

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    Comment Date
    Fri, 02 May 2008 20:41:08 +0000
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  21. if all you are looking for is a vectorized image of the picture you provided, that is very simple. you can open up adobe illustrator and "live trace" the image using cartoon features.

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    Comment Date
    Sat, 03 May 2008 21:37:57 +0000
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  22. Submitted design #23

    color changes and enhancements.

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    Lyte
    Comment Date
    Mon, 05 May 2008 20:08:24 +0000
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  23. Submitted design #24

    close up shot

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    Mon, 05 May 2008 20:08:40 +0000
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  24. thx! #23 is your best entry. can you confirm that they will also be standalone illustrations (boy and girl alone)

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    Comment Date
    Mon, 05 May 2008 21:14:14 +0000
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  25. yeah, they are "grouped" together in the picture, but they are each individual works. i can send in ai, eps, or pdf formats for your vector files.

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    Comment Date
    Mon, 05 May 2008 22:24:44 +0000
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