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for the contest Line drawing showing how the Lower Jaw moves.

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  1. Other Graphic Design by unica Eliminated
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    #14
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  2. Other Graphic Design by unica
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    #13
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    4 Stars
  3. Other Graphic Design by unica Eliminated
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    #10
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    4 Stars
  4. Other Graphic Design by unica Eliminated
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    #9
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    4 Stars
  5. Other Graphic Design by unica Eliminated
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    #8
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    4 Stars

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    Fri, 02 May 2008 17:10:29 +0000
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    #13 looks better. #14... naw. :-)

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    Fri, 02 May 2008 10:51:12 +0000
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    Submitted design #14

    I wanted to show you a variation. Although you specifically asked for a line drawing, maybe the filled areas also make it less cluttered, the signs and lines are more easily distinguished now from the skull drawing.

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    Fri, 02 May 2008 05:23:46 +0000
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    Submitted design #13

    No problem. Here we go.

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    Thu, 01 May 2008 21:44:10 +0000
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    Much better but remove the text you now have over the axis completely. I can always add text and an arrow later. Also, remove the 3 arrows that went with the circles you pulled. I'm trying to unclutter the drawing.

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    Thu, 01 May 2008 08:13:24 +0000
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    Submitted design #10

    I implemented your suggested changes. Looking forward to your feedback.

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    Thu, 01 May 2008 05:48:47 +0000
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    So far, #8 is the closest to what we are looking for. The shading looks good and should print fine A few tweaks are in order though...

    1. Remove the text below the axis / over the spine. I don't want the spine covered.

    2. Remove some of the circles. If we count from outside to in. Remove circles 2, 3, and 4.

    Dan

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 10:12:26 +0000
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    Submitted design #9

    The same without shading.

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    Wed, 30 Apr 2008 10:05:46 +0000
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    Submitted design #8

    Would be nice to hear your feedback.

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