for the contest Avatar Contest
Submitted design #11
jungle jane.Hope u like it. Feedback appreciated.thanks
I do like. Very much. Her pose is appears active and fun. She looks good with and without the hat. Just one thing. She looks a bit vapid. Maybe because her mouth is open. Could you make her seem a bit more focused? Not quite so "huh?" I hope I'm making sense. Feel free to respond back with any questions.
Submitted design #16
my revise on smile, son not feel "vapid" anymore.Hope u like it.thanks
Thanks. There really isn't much difference. We would like her mouth closed (you can still show her teeth if you would like) and perhaps make her eyes more focused (like in #17). I understand we are running short on time.