Designs by jordandossett
for the contest Flyer Design For Family Healthcare Center
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- Wed, 26 Mar 2008 15:34:50 +0000
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Regarding design #6
These are distributed as newspaper inserts. Women between 30 to 40 is our target audience, so how is that unprofessional? The flyer looks pretty good, i think the bullets need to be more pronounced, the logo can be smaller, and can blend in with the flyer - no need to keep the same colors. Wellness Care attracts women and families that are more educated on healthcare, and more text / more info would be more of a draw. Also, the text for the reverse flyer was more of a filler, because the front side is more for the imagery / bullet points.
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- Wed, 26 Mar 2008 06:35:36 +0000
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Submitted design #6
I think you have a bit too much text going on and almost died when you said use a ** woman. Kind of unprofessional but given you seem to be a legit organization :) I also wonder how you plan to distribute this card. With all the text it won't be a self mailer which means you have an added cost of envelopes and postage. I would suggest less text for the back so you can include an area for postage and mailing address.
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