Designs by jmone

for the contest Design for Healthcare Staffing Company - $600

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  1. Web Page Design by jmone
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    #46
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    3 Stars
  2. Web Page Design by jmone Eliminated
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    #25
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    3 Stars
  3. Web Page Design by jmone
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    #24
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    snazawa
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    Wed, 19 Mar 2008 18:53:00 +0000
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    Regarding design #46

    Thanks for your newest design. At this point, I need to wait for the client to provide feedback on several designs I've already submitted for their review. If they are not really excited about any of them, then I'll present your design to them.

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    Wed, 19 Mar 2008 05:12:40 +0000
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    Submitted design #46

    Hi, here's my revision

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    snazawa
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    Tue, 18 Mar 2008 07:14:12 +0000
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    Regarding design #25

    Thanks for your entry. Please read my latest comments in the general comments section before you try to submit any revisions. I've modified the requirement slightly.

    Your design has some nice elements to it, but overall it's not one of my favorites so far. To begin with, it has a little too much purple. You really need a little less purple and a little less bright/saturated purple (not as toned down as your first entry though) and you probably need at least one additional color besides gray to complement the purple.

    You'll also want to remove the "keywords", "location" search items as well as the Member's login section since this site does no require that at this time.

    Also, I'm not particularly keen about the navigation bar. The gradient is not subtle enough. In addition, I'm not too keen on the main image below the navigation bar. I'm not sure that it works well to combine those three images.

    Lastly, I don't particularly like the style of the graphic element in the headings. They are unique and artistic, but they don't really look great to me.

    I think it's interesting that you are the only one who chose to use tabs in the content section. I had not thought of that, but it might actually be a good use of that space. Unfortunately, I don't like the look of these particular tabs and I think they would be difficult to recreate using CSS.

    Thanks again for you efforts and feel free to submit a revision, but at this moment there are several other designs that I'm much more drawn to and follow my requirements a little more closely.

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    Tue, 18 Mar 2008 07:00:40 +0000
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    Regarding design #24

    Please read my comments for your second entry.

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    Tue, 18 Mar 2008 05:28:02 +0000
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    Submitted design #25

    color option

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    jmone
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    Tue, 18 Mar 2008 04:57:29 +0000
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    Submitted design #24

    hi, here's my entry.
    feedback is welcome!

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