for the contest Corporate identity update to web 2.0
Submitted design #10
Here it is a BC proposal.
If there is anything you like here i will continue with the rest of it.
Emi
Regarding design #10
I love the concepts, especially 2nd from the top. I also like the first one a lot, but think I prefer the curves in number 2. (So you're clear on how I am referring to the images -- Columns 1-2: Card 1, 2, 3 ; Column2 3-4: Card 4)
On Card 2, Can you try updating the orange in the crescent and the logo to match the brighter tangerine color on the back side of card number 2? I like your color better than mine.
On the back of the card, I like something more akin to Card 1 or 4, where either orange or blue is used as the primary color and the other color is used as an accent. I would also like to see the tagline incorporated on the back of the card. This can even be done subtley with two-tones of the same color or white on orange.
Submitted design #12
Stationery
Regarding design #12
Focusing on stationery, the balance feels too much toward the bottom of the page because most of the color is there.
I like very much the idea of the mixed color line. Perhaps move it to the top of the page, make it narrower to that is an accent to the logo, similar to the solid blue line is now.
I prefer the contact information in the bottom margin on one line, separated by bullets. It only need address, phone, fax, web. (no personal contact info on the stationery)
Also, no need for watermark using the agilite mark.
Regarding design #13
For stationery, I like the concept you submitted first better. (See my comments under that submission.)
Re: business card, my favorite is still the one at the top of this page. I love the front side of this care. The only adjustment on the front side of the card, is that I will need 3 phone numbers (office, cell, fax).
On the back of the card, I would like to see our slogan, "Insurance Automation on Demand" incorporated. You don't have to have the mark, unless it makes an interesting backgroun, where you're able to incorporate the mark. I also would like less white on the back and more blue or orange.
