for the contest 2 sided Flyer Design
Submitted design #19
Entry 1
Regarding design #19
Nice layout. I did submit a logo you can alter.. http://www.6speedonline.com/carpics/immlogo.gif
Few Typos... its "Do you have Carpal Tunnel... not Tunner"
There should be a question mark after "Surgery"
Elmhurst Phone number is 630-941-8661 - Make the fonts more pronounced (larger, perhaps black outline or drop shadow..using fonts as No More Surgery perhaps)
Make the hand Bigger and come up from the bottom. Put the "Free Consultation" on the corner (put "with this flyer" rather than a coupon cut out) and the logo above it somewhere or in the middle. The Symptoms should be more pronounced and more visible.
In the Sciatica Image, is there any way you can extend the red glow to shoot down the leg - as Sciatica has radiating pain down the leg from the buttucks. Right now it kind of depicts like internal /tummy pain. The transparent Image is great, wonder if they had a better angle.Phone number for Elmhurst on both flyers are wrong.
Regarding design #19
Also for "Free Consultation with this flyer" should be in the corner but not necessarily with the red square behind it. Have it free floating on that bottom stripe color. IN the top image have that blue stripe go from left to right (behind the anatomical image)
Regarding design #19
BTW, i am referring to the blue stripe behind the address/phone number (on the bottom) have it go from left to right like the bottom image (where the gold stripe goes left to right)
Submitted design #20
Here is the revise ads with your suggestions. Please be aware that just for presentation porpuses I'm using low quality images if my design is picked I will provide you with excellent high quality images. Feedback will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Regarding design #20
If is ok with you, can I change the text color in the logo to black?
Regarding design #20
the logo doesn't look good. the white in the D and the O looks weid. Perhaps just make it all BLACK LOGO
"Consultation" under the FREE should be bigger (to the width of the FREE)
Also last minute change - in the "We offer" section change "Diagnostic Imaging" to Diagnostic Testing
Change Pain Management to Family Wellness
Make the "FREE" on both sides identical in size. the top one looks a tad bigger now.
Thanks
the phone numbers are not aligned up to each other. The ELmhurst number looks lower.
Other than that looking great
Regarding design #20
I will do those changes and repost thanks :)
Submitted design #25
Here is the revise version of the previous entry with all the changes that you requested. Let me know if you need anything else changed. Thanks :)
Regarding design #25
This was a real close one. I declare this the winner due to the visual effects. Very eye catching.
