for the contest Abstract, dynamic, flair and wow!
Submitted design #10
custom font...
Submitted design #11
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Regarding design #10
Thank you for this, it certainly is a bit different - which is what I am looking for. I like the way you have joined the o's, but I wonder how it would look if it had a background, or underline, perhaps even add to the flow with it being italicised? From the colour choices you have provided, I think the red suits this best.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Thanks.
Regarding design #11
Yep, that is pretty good too - don't mind the colour selection on this, but as with my previous comment, perhaps the italics or background?
Submitted design #12
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Submitted design #14
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Regarding design #12
Thanks for those, I will definately be keeping them in mind for consideration.
Regarding design #14
I like the addition of the solid 'o's, it adds another dynamic. I know that I said I like the red, but am wondering if you could present these in another colourscheme? perhaps something towards and orange/goldy yellow, just a thought...
Submitted design #54
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Submitted design #55
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Regarding design #54
I like them, but unfortuately the straight lines are not quite what we need for Koorooloo! The idea is great though - perhaps using the same concept, but with wavy lines?
Regarding design #55
Similar vein to the previous entry, but I think the colours of the others work much better - thanks anyhow!