for the contest SmallWorldBlogs.com (CONTEST ENDING SOON)
Submitted design #6
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Regarding design #6
Hi,
Very nice! I really like how you subtly captured the idea of travel and community with the world in the "o" in blogs. Nicely done.
The one thing I notice is that the word "small" is differentiated by size from the words, "world" and "blogs" and that makes it seem a bit disconnected. I think instead, it might be better to visually keep "small" and "world" together and disconnect them from the "blogs" word.
Overall, I think this is on the right track.
-Michael.
Submitted design #7
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Submitted design #15
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Regarding design #15
I think I still like the first version best. Do you think going back to the #1 version, we could see if we could maybe make the words "small" and "world" still on top of each other, but the same size? So maybe the word "blogs" gets bigger to equal the combined size of the words "small" and "word". Hope I explained that right.
Thanks.