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for the contest $400 Logo and independent graphic for Health Company

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    #185
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    3 Stars
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    #184
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    4 Stars
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    #128
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    3 Stars
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    #47
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    4 Stars
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    #46
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    MichaelJakobsson
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    Tue, 15 Jan 2008 14:50:17 +0000
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    Regarding design #47

    I am finally removing this in favor of other entries. But I like the way you work, will try to contact you before our upcoming contest on design for our webshop. I'll try to keep it to fewer higher quality entrants next time.

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    MichaelJakobsson
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    Tue, 15 Jan 2008 14:49:39 +0000
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    Regarding design #184

    Finally removing this in favor of other entries. But look out for our upcoming contest on web design for our web shop.

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    arpad
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    Sun, 23 Dec 2007 01:51:26 +0000
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    Regarding design #185

    Let me see what I can come up with. Thanks.

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    MichaelJakobsson
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    Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:46:26 +0000
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    Regarding design #185

    The two left ones are the more interesting of these in my opinion but. Perhaps the flower-like variant could have another similar flower-structure growing from the point of one of it's leaves but where the leaves are of a different sice so the flower-shape becomes smaller or larger, and that one in turn has one from another random leaf with yet again diffrent size, and it goes on in a way so it stretches out in different directions but not exactly rectangular rather in different directions and somtimes bac towards the middle etc. So the total graphic is a mix of different sized -flower-shapes, growing point to point from random points in random directions, or maybe you could come up with something better?

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    MichaelJakobsson
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    Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:41:18 +0000
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    Regarding design #185

    I guess this is a go at some complementary graphic. I think I'll try to stop using the word pattern, since everyone creates such symetrical suggestions. As I just wrote to someone else this is too much repeated symetry for my taste. Even the individual shapes themself are pretty symetrical but mainly the patterna as a whole. I'd like something that does not expand symetrical in all directions but sort of grows irregularly more in some directions than others, denser in some parts than others, with not so much repeatedness between the smaller elements either. Like in nature where things are often more random (unless you look very close where there is usually symetry).

    The competing entries http://contests.sitepoint.com/conte…ies/284265
    and
    http://contests.sitepoint.com/conte…ies/283478
    are a little more like what I tried to explain above allthough it still isn't exactly what I wanted. Perhaps you could create something more random either by combining your leaf-symbols in a different way or by creating some new art for it?

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    MichaelJakobsson
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    Sun, 23 Dec 2007 00:37:10 +0000
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    Regarding design #184

    Hi and thans!
    I think it's good the leaves on the V kindof looks like a torch wich is also a cool effect. It's not like I imagined but it looks good. I'll keep this variation too. I think my next step is to go thorough all the similar entries from same designers and decide which one I like best befor compareing them towards each other. I'm not sure yet wheter it's this or your original versin that is best, but I'm thinking maybe it's this one. Will se what my coullegues think too.

    Merry christmas and happy new year to you too :)

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    Sat, 22 Dec 2007 00:35:00 +0000
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    Submitted design #184

    I did the changes you suggested and I think it works really well. Please let me kow your thoughts! Thanks.

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
    João

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    MichaelJakobsson
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    Thu, 20 Dec 2007 02:08:13 +0000
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    Regarding design #128

    We looked at it again, and thik that the typeface is ok but we are not to fond of the symbol. And the patterns it creates will inevitably be rather symetrical. I'd prefer something that can connect togeather in different or unexpected ways.

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    Wed, 19 Dec 2007 22:54:52 +0000
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    Regarding design #47

    Good points there, I'm on it.

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    Wed, 19 Dec 2007 22:54:09 +0000
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    Regarding design #46

    Great, let me work on it :)