for the contest Global football (soccer) logo - baws.eu
Submitted design #3
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Regarding design #3
Like thenarc. Can you move it slightly to the left, so that it lands on the dot, and make the dot a football? Then it should look like the football has landed in the site name.
Good concept. Thanks.
Regarding design #3
'thenarc' should have read 'the arc' of course. Trying to keep off the narcs ;-)
Regarding design #3
The more I look at this, the more I like it. Ball landing on green grass. Blue being the fans - who the site is aimed at. Just not sure about the blue though. Can you use another colour/shade to give the impression that the colour at the top can be construed as being the people around the pitch?
Regarding design #3
I'll get to work on your changes. Thank you.
Submitted design #4
Revised.
Submitted design #5
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Regarding design #4
Great, thanks. Looks much better in those colours - and with the two arcs now. Can you try and move the arcs to the left as suggested before? Just so I can see if it looks better/worse.
And can you make the whole thing 'pop'? Looks a bit flat - although I do like the design :-)
Regarding design #5
Prefer the orange - but 'might' prefer this green I say 'might' because it's hard to say with the darker black on the ball. Too much contrast there. Preferred the lighter shaded ball.
Arcs seperated this way is better too.
Thanks again.
Regarding design #5
Plus, can you try with the green being a straight lie above the ball. I can see that you're going for an equal thickness around each letter/ball - I just think it would give more of a 'football landing on football pitch' feel.
Regarding design #5
lie = line
Regarding design #7
Yes. Like what you did to the arcs - and straightening the green line. Excellent.
Can you make the orange slightly deeper/darker - but not as dark as the red you used before. Think it needs a bit 'boldening' - and this should do it. Like the shade of the ball now too.
Thanks again.
Submitted design #11
Revised.
Regarding design #11
Perfecto. Thanks.
Submitted design #30
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Regarding design #30
Thanks.