for the contest The Iron Skirt - looking for imaginative logos
Submitted design #12
2 variations of placement.
Submitted design #14
oops! missed the part about a tag line... added it in.
Submitted design #15
smaller tag line
Regarding design #12
Interesting approach..hits the clever button, for me, too clever. Too many competing messages within the design structure to introduce another element (oh, good pun!)
Regarding design #14
I think it just reinforces the point of too much going on. I am inspired by your creativity, though!