for the contest Logo for "Ideen-Salon" - A gathering to help ideas into the world
Submitted design #15
feedback appreciated
Regarding design #15
i like your submissions quite a bit: a group of people with balloons representing their discussion.
but how about replacing the red person´s balloon with some symbol for "idea"? the situation is asymmetric in a gathering: one person presents an idea, the others give feedback.
also, try to play around with the font for "salon". can you make it look a little bit "older"?
Regarding design #15
sure thing! i will work on it!
Submitted design #17
let me know if is this font better?
Regarding design #17
the font for "salon" is better, but the hyphen is missing in "ideen-salon". but maybe you can play around with the "salon"-font a bit? how about an english script font? "ideen" on the other hand could be set in a serif-less font. the colors i liked better in your previous submission. the bulb instead of the balloon looks nice.
Regarding design #17
thanks for the feedback, revision coming soon!
Submitted design #18
feedback are welcome
Regarding design #18
thanks for the variation. other than I have thought the two different fonts don't make up for a harmonious overall impression. we need to back to the one-font-idea.
other suggestions:
- color of the idea-owner-figure should be the same as the color of the word "Ideen" + colors of the other figures should be the same as the word "Salon" (red could be nice for that)
- please try to put the bulb upright and a little lower
- please try a version with graphics left and text right, the text could be supplemented with our domain (www.ideen-salon.de)
Submitted design #26
feedback are welcome!
Regarding design #26
Great submission! But still we´d like you to tweak it a little bit:
-the font for "ideen-salon" (mind the dash!) should be a bit taller, more modern (serif-less?), compact so as to fit the domain completely under it. both should have the same width.
-the color for "salon" can be a bit darker, more cosy, redish/brownish leather-like. think of a leather sofa in a club ;-) the color of "ideen-" should then be switched to red. not a bright red, though. both colors should fit together, be similar, but different ;-)
-the little figures should again match the word colors. the bulb can stay golden. the height of the figures including the balloons/bulb should be the same as the two text lines. there should be no obvious gap between the figures and the text.
Submitted design #43
revision!
Submitted design #44
more font styles
Regarding design #43
that looks good. a cool idea to turn the figures around! now stretch the domain to have the same width as the name.
Regarding design #43
i mean for the lower picture. the font is slender enough.
Regarding design #44
how about turning the figures for the top image around?
Submitted design #45
revision