for the contest Funds Transfer Alliance Logo
Submitted design #25
Happy to make any changes needed. Feedback welcome
Regarding design #25
i like that you were bold enough to put the words right into the logo..
how can we make it better? lets see
Id say color.. taking the icon to a different level with making it look like a building or two dollars back to back .. something.. like that//.. thoughts?
Submitted design #34
In this one I used 2 dollar bills as you suggested. I also took the text colors from the bills.
I think the symbolism in the first entry gives more of a feel of strength and stability than this. Let me know what you think.
Regarding design #34
i agree! The literal nature of my suggestion doesnt look right. Maybe more of an abstract bill who knows.. YOUrE the pro! :)
Submitted design #54
Here I made the icon look more like a building. Different color and font. Let me know if you would like any changes.
Regarding design #54
I really do like this. Super clean. You made the sub words more discreet - its in the top 3 now.. I'm not sure what could be done to it.. to make it better.. i thought adding a second color.. but the straight clean cut look feels better..
Regarding design #54
ALSO! this might be overdoing it.. and changing the simplicity of your design which is it's strong point.. but is there a way to put a small colored diamond (or just a line) in the top left corner of the right side of the building to hint at a flag.. symbolically..?
Submitted design #56
Thank you for considering my design. Here are a few variations with different shapes/colors in the top left of the solid section. Of these 3 I think the white star works best. The colors would work if that same color was in the text but without that they distract the eye from your company name.
Regarding design #56
I feel exactly the same way as you. The shapes themselves maybe be destracting but the colored one definately pull your attention away from the co. name. I'll marinate on this and let you know :)
Regarding design #56
Can you change the order of the words.. to Stability, Power, Trust
Submitted design #57
Changed the order of the words in the tagline.
Regarding design #57
its outstanding. can you bring the 3 words up a bit.. to be the same distance off of the dividing bar.. as the FTA working? maybe drop the font size on the tag line down a little?
Regarding design #57
also please change the commas to periods.
Submitted design #60
Here are the requested changes.
Regarding design #60
three more things and we are done in my opinion. Please pull the Funds text away from the building a bit (the same distance that you have in between each word) and because I think we need one final visual accent, I want to suggest taking the ONE line on the right side of the building and filling it in with lime green. I think it will still hold focus TO the words (vs the stars that distracted).. but gives it a design element thats not so sterile. THoughts? Feel free to try other colors.. but our office is blue and bright green so it should put the blue ribbon on your design.. Also with the tag line. the periods should either be periods meaning right up against the right of each word, or they should be elevated and floating in air in the cetner of each word centered in between all.. ThANKS!
Submitted design #66
I've made the spacing changes you requested and changed the periods to bullets. Here are two variations with the green on the right side; let me know if this is what you were looking for.
Regarding design #66
the top logo the shoe-in. I'm trying desperatley to find somethgin wrong with it but i cant.. :0) which is a very good thing. the only thing i could think of is maybe the stability + lettering be that same lime,... with a dark blue outline? but would that hold up on shrit embroyderies..
Submitted design #69
Thank you for your comments. Here is the top one with the tagline in green. The green I used previously was a bit too neon for the lettering so I toned it down just a bit. It does create nice balance with the green in the icon.
Regarding design #69
how about grey. and maybe an outlined font style with the green or both.
IMO your "revisions" is best but we might as well check all options..
Regarding design #69
lets get rid of the green.. and go back to the original blue and grey color scheme found in "revisions" but keep the adjusted spacing and bullets. As appealing as the green line was, the blue and grey is far more classic, and not so contemporary. if you can return it as one image vs. two.. we'll be able to declare it a winner.
Submitted design #72
I agree - the grey is more classic looking and will stand the test of time better. I wasn't sure if you wanted the green bar left in the icon so will submit that next as a separate entry.
Submitted design #73
with the green bar