Designs by cafemocha

for the contest Banner ads for Flying Solo .com.au

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  1. Banner Ad Design by cafemocha Winning Design
    #14 Winning Design
  2. Banner Ad Design by cafemocha
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    robertgerrish
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    Wed, 12 Sep 2007 22:03:48 +0000
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    Regarding design #14

    Great work, we're delighted with what you have done!

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    Sun, 09 Sep 2007 04:26:14 +0000
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    Submitted design #14

    thanks for the comment. yah, I been over done on previous one, sorry on that . here is the updated.

    http://www.fandesign.com/transfer/f…solo3.html

    ps... the star flying part was "daunting" got beat out. might works better with sound FX lol :)

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    Sun, 09 Sep 2007 00:36:19 +0000
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    Regarding design #8

    Thanks for amending the earlier entry. We're not convinced that the extra design elements you've added - the green band, the red, the heavy use of bold text and the stars - add anything though. The strong simplicity of your earlier work has been eroded slightly. The way you've handled the 'close' is ideal and as before your animation of the type is superb.

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    Sat, 08 Sep 2007 15:45:21 +0000
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    Submitted design #8

    http://www.fandesign.com/transfer/f…solo2.html

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    Sat, 08 Sep 2007 12:31:34 +0000
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    Regarding design #5

    What you've done here is awesome. It's got just the feel and energy we're after.
    A couple of particular items of feedback:
    (1) Because of what you've done with the colours on the words 'working solo' there's a danger that this appears as a logo or company name, when in reality it's neither.
    (2)The 'lightning' effect works brilliantly at the outset, but could perhaps be dropped from its second appearance (during 'daunting). Or diluted at least.
    (3)When www.flyingsolo.com.au enters it should remove ALL other text and appear alone momentarily, before 'you're not alone!' enters. By all means add the second colour to 'solo' as flyingsolo is indeed the brand. Thanks again. Great work!

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    Sat, 08 Sep 2007 07:59:29 +0000
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    Submitted design #5

    hi, here is the file.

    http://www.fandesign.com/transfer/f…gsolo.html

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