Designs by Monkeyshine
for the contest Logo for Healthcare Revenue Management firm
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- Wed, 05 Sep 2007 23:45:23 +0000
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Regarding design #56
Thank you, Monkeyshine for your effort. You were very good at what I asked of you. The only advice I have on departing was that the trailing arms of the logo component (here, a starfish) seem to interfere with the lettering in the name. Peace and thanks!
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 22:40:47 +0000
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Regarding design #56
Thank you.
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 21:59:22 +0000
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Regarding design #48
Don't know if this got it. I think image 1 of your Entry 5 is going to be the ticket. Can I see it in reverse?
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 21:58:31 +0000
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Regarding design #39
I like the upper image here... it seems to have much of the feedback we've been discussing--longer trailing dots and the best balance of font weight/colors.
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 19:49:54 +0000
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Submitted design #39
Reduced the size of the squares and extended the trail. Also tried it with circles.
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 19:32:41 +0000
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Regarding design #36
Yea, cool... the dots are better than the "WiFi" tips. The network effects I'm referring to are between humans (or in this case starfish) rather than data transmission.
I think the top version here has promise if there's some way to clean up the dots and integrate them into the design better. (Perhaps if each one was smaller and formed a longer track?)
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 19:26:29 +0000
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Submitted design #36
Tried to symbolize network or data being transfered
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- Mon, 03 Sep 2007 18:05:28 +0000
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Regarding design #26
You sure did... perfectly. Of these, I think I like the more robust third version with the top version being a very close 2nd. Against these more hearty fonts, the tagline could be slightly more prominent, however.
Here's the only challenge: Where do we go with the long-legged starfish interpretation? I'm looking for a way to suggest a network. Do you have any ideas on how to incorporate this network notion into your design?
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Submitted design #26
Changed Color and a few different fonts
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Regarding design #23
This version is cool. Love to the long-legged starfish interpretation, especially since the "i" is the belly of the fish. What would this look like by changing what is colored what? Meaning: "Starfish" in black (instead of gray).
Also, like the tagline font but am a little more ambivalent about the Starfish font.
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