for the contest Logo for Healthcare Revenue Management firm
Submitted design #7
my proposal
Regarding design #7
Interesting!
(1) Like the multi-color of the upper-left starfish symbol. The symbol itself could be a little less symmetric. Good minimization of the tagline under it.
(2) Like the symbol to the left of the upper-right logo but doesn't really do anything suggesting a network effect. If you could somehow make it look more like a network/starfish, it could work. I do like the line between that logo and the type, however.
Good start, Rogvaiv...
Submitted design #15
2nd
Regarding design #15
The second (huskier) rendition works well too, though would like to see the gray/black brought back into the starfish symbol. What if you placed a gray/black "node" in the center of the starfish and connected a diagonal "background" line to the lower right of the whole logo where it became another smaller gray/black starfish of its own. This is suggestive of the kind of network effect I'm looking for in this logo.
Good hue on the red color but wouldn't mind seeing the gray in the tagline a bit darker.
I consider you a top 3 contender. Please keep working.
Submitted design #20
3rd
Regarding design #20
Now how about bringing the huskier starfish logo (bottom of 2nd entry) into this version and connecting it with the fish over the "i" in this version? Oh, and see if you can introduce some gray/black into the huskier starfish logo (central dot/node?) connecting to the other fish over the "i".
Also, consider switching the color scheme with "Starfish" being red and "Rev Mgmnt" being gray/black.
Regarding design #20
Query for all contestants: Would you prefer the length of this contest to be shorter or longer? It's now ending this Friday. Could possibly bump up the end-date to Wednesday evening. Your thoughts?
Submitted design #27
4th
concerning the deadline, is your decision, for me doesn't matter too much
Submitted design #28
5th
Regarding design #28
I love the starfish symbol (with its centrally connected lines to the feet of the fish)!
Separating the colors in Starfish makes me pronounce in my mind each syllable separately. While visually interesting, its phonetically distracting and slows the reader down looking at the name. Let's make it one tone.
Is there any way to bring back the thicker starfish symbol in your Entry 2, make it look more like the symbol here and connect them?
Submitted design #34
6th
Regarding design #34
Getting there... let me do a re-cap/summary and see if we can condense all the feedback so far.
(1) I liked the relative sizes of the starfish symbol from your very first proposal (top left) in relationship to the type "Starfish". I liked the symbol over the capitalized "S" in the upper left of the logo. Can you move it back?
(2) While I liked the big symbol over the capitalized "S", I also liked the smaller symbol over the "i". I was hoping the two symbols (larger over S and smaller over i) could be connected with a line, suggesting the two are networked together.
(3) In this top version here (#6th) I love the gray within the body of the starfish symbol.
(4) Everything else is perfect (color/hues, type, fonts and text sizes, etc.)
Regarding design #34
ok, i will make the adjustments tomorrow, thanks
Submitted design #78
with changes
Submitted design #84
more organic starfish ;)
Regarding design #78
Excellent, I think this includes nearly all the feedback we've discussed.
Regarding design #84
Organic for sure... sort of looks like my dinner this evening--spaghetti.
I think you nailed the last design, Rogvaiv. I'm submitting your Entry #7 to my partners. It's fantastic.
Regarding design #78
OK, Rog... my partners like your logo. Here's what they requested.
(1) Please stregthen the lines of the logo but without compromising its elegance.
(2) We'd like to see in inverse (on a dark background)
(3) Could you produce a solid color version in red? Sort of like the gray one here.
Thanks, Rogvaiv. You've done some excellent work here.
Submitted design #131
9th
Regarding design #131
Nailed it! Thanks, George.