for the contest Lone Star Equestrian Center
Submitted design #8
Jumping the name through a star
Regarding design #8
So sorry it took a while for feedback. I ended up having to go out of town for a few days. This one has all of the elements I asked for, but it just doesn't do much for me. I am not crazy about the line coming out of the star, and the lettering isn't my favorite. I think it should be bolder. I do really like the horse jumping out of the star. Thanks so much!
Submitted design #36
Made some changes have the horse jumping the star