for the contest Logo Design for Great Moves!
Submitted design #8
Please let me know how I can improve on this concept
Regarding design #8
Excellent! I love the use of the box - especially with the lids open. It seems joyful and celebratory...like victory! The font is very playful, too. This is definitely in the running. We may play around with colors/fonts a bit, but a great effort. Thanks!
Regarding design #8
I'm glad you like it. Feel free to PM me or leave some more feedback in regard to the colors and fonts, or anything else you might think of.
Regarding design #8
Clashmore,
We meet this afternoon to discuss entries. Your's is still one of my favorites. I've seen some images of a "happy home" that seems effective. If you have time, can you replace the box with a very simple design/outline of a home - perhaps with a smiling face or somthing similar. Just an idea that is transpiring, and no guarantees that we'll go that direction. (I'd just like to have some variations to present to my team.) Leave everything else intact, however. Thanks!
Regarding design #8
Clashmore,
Can you show us a few variations with slightly less silly/frilly font for Great Moves!(not much less, though!) Also, could you match the shading for the tagline with the color on the Name, or the color on the box (or both)?
Your logo is already a finalist with my team. Now we'd like to see some comparisons. Thanks.
Regarding design #8
Absolutely. I'll get those revisions posted ASAP.
Submitted design #57
Changes:
The box now features a smiling face, making it seem even more celebratory.
The tag line is now in the same color as the main text, and I've changed its alignment.
The main font is now a little more refined, though still playful.
I've also shown that the logo works on dark backgrounds, in greyscale, and in black and white. Let me know what to do next!
Regarding design #57
Well done. Could you do one more like this one, but with the tagline as in the original - centered under the name - and with the gray shaded box? Thanks!
Regarding design #57
Sure
Regarding design #57
clashmore...
more thoughts! Also, how about the original (#1 version), but with the tagline background color the same as the screened color on the left side of your box.
We prefer the tagline centered under the logo as in version #1. We'd consider a different style border (as opposed to oblong) for the tagline possibly.
Overall, we're leaning back to versions of your original design - fonts included. There is real beauty in its simplicity.
The b & w and gray scale samples are also very helpful. (The ability to go b&w effectively eliminated a few of the competitors.) Thanks!!
Submitted design #82
As you requested :)
Regarding design #82
Submitted this before reading your other feedback...whoops, I'll get those changes done
Submitted design #83
Almost full circle, back to the original (with the exception of the different colored tagline)...let me know what else I can do
Regarding design #83
Great. Per my last feedback...maybe try a differenct style border for the tagline just for kicks. Something other than oblong - maybe squared off edges, ribbon edge (reverse v), etc. Thanks.
Regarding design #83
Sure, can do.
Submitted design #93
Here are a couple of options for the tag line. Of these three, I prefer number 2, but it's up to you, of course :)
Regarding design #93
I'm leaning towards the original version in oblong. I'll get feedback from the team. Thanks!
Regarding design #93
Same here. I think the oblong looks best. Anything else I can do, let me know.
Submitted design #96
As you requested...larger tag line
Regarding design #96
Perfect. Thanks!