for the contest Tri-Fold brochure needed for Online Backup company
Submitted design #6
Here is a detailed view of all of the pages of the brochure. Feedback is appreciated.
Submitted design #7
And here is a presentation view. It would be folded with the third on the left of the top half folding inbetween the other two, so you open it and view the two introduction paragraphs about the company. Then open that page to view the three inside thirds in landscape with all the rest of the information.
Regarding design #7
I like the overall concept and color scheme. Could you put some more emphasis on the contact information so people know we want them to call us or visit the site.
Submitted design #8
Updated the following:
- Added HIPAA logo
- Added "hook" sentance to the info page with 2 paragraphs
- Changed contact information to your actual contact information
- Made contacts more noticable over the other text around it
Regarding design #8
I like this. Is there a way to put our phone number and a 'call now to get started' apart from our contact info?
Regarding design #8
Where would you like something like that put?
Submitted design #9
Added "Get started, call us now!" and the number on the information page with the two paragraphs about the company.
Regarding design #9
I still feel it needs something to jump out and give them a call to action. I don't want to ruin the clean corporate look you've got as I really like that but maybe something in the area where the racked servers are. I'd hate for it to look real nice and people get it and think its an informative brochure and it just gets tossed. Something real clear like 'get started backing up your data now' Free for 30 days or for only $10 per month etc.
Submitted design #14
Used the blue to attract a lot of attention from the rest of the page to show the 3 main simple reasons to use DiskSave, and the red to capture almost all of the attention telling people to call now, with the contact information in the middle people are bound to read it inbetween the two.