for the contest ***Website for Professional Voice Talent***
Submitted design #4
comments appreciated
ryan & graham @colourworks
Thanks for your submission! Here's some feedback...
- I like the player, but I plan on adding 2 (or more) demos in the future...would this have the capability to do that?
- I'd like "Voice Talent" OR "Professional Voice Overs", not both. Voice Talent is too big...the logo should definitely be bigger than Voice Talent.
- The menu options are too thick for my liking.
- I do like the overall look though.
Thanks!
please read pm
got it, thanks. Also, it looks like the logo is stretched a little...definitely want to keep it as is.
Submitted design #8
re worked
- really like the player in #8, but it seems disjointed from the rest
- don't like the purple background
- maybe the same player, with menu buttons below, more simple up top and a smaller picture of me..
Submitted design #13
reworked
Submitted design #15
for your revision
I like the players in both #13 and #15 - would they both be able to play one file now and then a few files in the future?
- #13 still feels like 2 separate things to me. Maybe the player could be on top (which would include having the logo on top) and the head shot and menu items could go on the bottom without a second logo
- I don't like the way the menu items are in boxes..
- I think there's too much of me in #15. I like how I'm faded in the background and wouldn't mind seeing a version like that...without a second picture of me
it's really helpful for me to look back at all your submissions as sometimes there's bits and pieces I like from the original ones...if you don't have to withdraw them, that would be great..
Submitted design #20
revised
Submitted design #21
revised
Submitted design #22
revision
Submitted design #23
concept
Hi...don't have time to give feedback right now, but can you please leave all these up until I have some more time to look at them? There's certain things I like from each one..
Thanks!
Hi...
- I like the picture of me faded in rather than out like on #22
- I like the player on #20 and #21 the best, but would like to see that purple
- I don't like the lines between menu items
- I like the 2 colors for Professional Voice Overs...Voiceovers should be 2 words though. I'd like to see a version with Professional Voice Talent instead (still trying to figure out which I prefer)
- don't like the extra Susan Sierra on #23 and think the logo should be bigger (I do like the shadow though..
Thanks!
oops, I meant facing in not faded in
I like the player on #20 and #21 the best, but would like to see that purple
Susan do you mean the buttons or the actual player
sorry...didn't see this comment until now...
I meant the actual player (where it's orange, I'd like to see purple)