for the contest Logo needed for Pursuit Magazine
Submitted design #14
my design
Submitted design #15
other composition
I like your overall design- it is obvious that you do good design work. Let's look at #14 as the overall layout works better, I think, and it is one of my top picks in this contest.
Here are a couple of suggestions:
1. Bring "Magazine" up further into "Pursuit" so that it overlaps like in the example provided at http://www.compasspointpi.com/pursuitlogo.htm
2. Keep the tagline to the right so that it even with the end of "Pursuit."
3. Change the color of the handle of the magnifying glass to add some "pop" and make it longer or make the glass portion smaller- it's not quite proportionate.
4. I like what you've done with the eye- it shows a focused train of thought but I am not sure that it is necessary. I think I'd prefer to see a thumbprint or a footprint brought into detail under the glass perhaps...
5. The font used for "magazine" is not quite think or bold enough- maybe if it gets overlapped onto "Pursuit" that will change.
Thanks again for your submissions.
Submitted design #72
changes
Submitted design #73
other alternative
Submitted design #75
changes
Submitted design #76
other alternative
Submitted design #80
other composition