for the contest EDS footwear fashion
Submitted design #5
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Hey bz,
Thanks for your entry and for trying something with an Asian flavour. For me however it doesn't quite hit the mark. I might be being distracted by the all caps which I'm not a big fan of but I also think that the EDS lacks some clarity. Perhaps you'll give it a second bash.
All the best,
Tyler
Hi bz, I would like to see more of the colors represented in our website - light blue and dark blue and the EDS font needs to be a little more contructed and prefer lower case for FF.
Thanks, Jenny
Submitted design #49
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Hi bz, your new submission #49 with the shoe silhouette is great. Can you add the half moon swoosh over the top in matching blue as 'DS' for comparison - thanks! J
Submitted design #64
revision
Hi bz, we love your concept on the right! Please can you play around with the E to make it look more obviously an E - people looking at the logo would not know that this is EDS - it looks like "DS.
Not totally closed, but perhaps the same stroke on the top of the E. Thanks! J
i just want to make sure...are you talking about entry #5???
Submitted design #78
revision
Submitted design #79
with a white outline
Submitted design #84
color variation and more white space between the letters and shoe
Hi bz, Using #79 can you change the E to the BLUE to match the DS - leave the shoe RED.
Second option is to give the red E a back - maybe in the form of a brush stroke than a solid back - so that people read it immediately as an E. EDS is the co name and at the moment it is the DS that gets the focus. Tks J