for the contest PrivateEye.com - Reinvent a Great Brand
Submitted design #15
Hi, this is my concept. What do you think?
Hi .Looka. Thanks for your submission. We like it a lot! We have a few iterative requests:
1) Although we like what you've done with the logo image being reflected in the "start search" button, we're not huge fans of the image itself. That said, could you please try a different conceptual image, or get rid of the image altogether and just stick with a typographical logo?
2) Please bring the "search | help | login" area into alignment with the "Private Eye." then take the dotted line and extend it, along with the blue-ish gradient up into the ad-space (so the ad is worked into the header instead of floating above it).
3) Remove the "1, 2 and 3" and replace them with some kind of graphical representation of the "People Search," "Public Records Searches" and "Family Searches."
4) Brighten up the color scheme. It's a little too pastel at the moment. Can you make it deeper and brighter? Maybe another color palette entirely would look nice as well?
Thanks again!
Thank you for detailed feedback! I'll make changes ASAP.
Thanks, .Looka.
Submitted design #29
Hi, I have made changes. What do you think now? Is it better?
Submitted design #30
Background variation.
Hi .Looka. Wow! We love design #30. Thanks so much for these iterations. Could you please carry through the design of #30 into either a Search Results Page (Page 2) design or a Product Selection Page (Page 3) design? We'd like to see one more page (not a page 1) from the designers before we pick a winner.
Thanks again. We really like this design - especially the new logo and how it repeats throughout the design of the first page.
Submitted design #31
I have designed search result page.
What do you think? Do you want me to change something?
Hi .Looka. Thanks for design #31. It's great! We do have a couple requests for changes.
1) Could you please try an iteration where you remove the Date of Birth, Phone #s, and Current/Past Address(es) columns?
2) Please brighten up the "Get Info" button. It is a little flat right now.
3) Think about where you'd like the "Get Info" button to be. If you like it on the right, leave it there, but if you think it might be better served on the left or displayed in another way, please feel free to try something new.
Thanks again for your work!
Submitted design #34
I have revised my entry. Changes are made. What do you think? Do you like usage of icons?
Submitted design #35
Variation. Get info buttons are moved to the left and the whole design is little tighter. Which one do you prefer?
.Looka, thanks again for all this great work! As I said in the main comments section, we'll be back in the office tomorrow to award final star ratings and choose a winner. Thanks for being with us throughout and for all your iterations!
Is there anything more that I can do, change, add, remove?
Thanks.